Audience feedback of rough cut

 

We showed our rough cut to our peers and they gave us feedback and commentary on the sheets of paper below:

 

 

 

 

 

Here is some of the audience feedback we received. We will take their ideas and advice on board in order to improve it - making the narrative clearer to the viewer and working on the finer details. I feel like we have the main shots however just need to work on capturing the attention of the viewer. We found from the feedback that it is quite repetitive so will try and improve the way in which the shots are delivered.  

Here are some of the key elements we intend on improving in order to create the most effective outcome ( music video) from the footage and ideas that we have.